This Primary 1 model composition on “Chinese New Year” was written by a Bun’s Academy student. Read how Egan develops a simple and engaging story while using appropriate vocabulary and staying relevant to the composition topic.
When we arrived at Grandma’s house, we greeted our relatives with oranges and received many ang baos. After a few hours, we headed to my great grandmother’s house.
At my great grandma’s house, I started playing with my older brother. Soon, I was starving as hunger pangs gripped me. I devoured a plate of curry bee hoon.
After eating, I watched some videos on daddy’s phone. At eight p.m., I was exhausted. I rubbed my bleary eyes and we headed home. It was indeed a wonderful day for everyone.
Written by: Egan Lee (P1 2026)
The Bun's Approach: Structure meets Creativity
Our classes balance creativity with structure. We teach students to memorise useful phrases and frameworks while helping them maintain their unique voice. Over time, even students who struggled to write a paragraph gain confidence and start enjoying the process.
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✔️ Clear, adaptable story structures
✔️ Vivid vocabulary and descriptive phrases
✔️ Repeated practice with constructive feedback
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Teacher Sabrina
Sabrina is a dedicated creative writing instructor at Buns Academy, known for her engaging teaching style and commitment to student success.
